Effective Business Writing

I used an “About Us” article from a property management company from Hatteras Island, NC named Hatteras Realty (http://www.hatterasrealty.com/hatteras_adv.htm). I think the article is very effective. The article describes everything that one can do while on vacation in Hatteras Island and invites you to call one of the “knowledgeable, eager professionals” whenever it is convenient with you. Although I’ve vacationed on Hatteras Island using Hatteras Realty, I still would love to go based on the article.